Touching

Sometimes I
touch beyond
the visible
stage, where
life is really playing,
where the
connection
with the world
is an effortless
flow.

– James Steerforth

This one is for 3WW and today’s three words: touching, visible, stage.

~ by James Steerforth on April 16, 2008.

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8 Responses to “Touching”

  1. Nicely done. I had an idea this prompt would go metaphysical, as mine has.

    anthonynorth said this on April 16, 2008 at 1:59 pm

  2. Effortless flow….I like the phrasing of it.

    Mine is concrete? Do tell me what you think!

    http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/04/green-eyed-monster.html

    gautami tripathy said this on April 16, 2008 at 4:01 pm

  3. Yes, YES, YES, James – when that happens, in spite of the busy, scrambling self, it is wonderful. Spare and elooquent, this ! G

    suburbanlife said this on April 16, 2008 at 4:04 pm

  4. and it is for those moments alone,, i live… masterfully done.

    whypaisley said this on April 17, 2008 at 12:15 am

  5. Thanks for opening it up to comments! :)

    I like how you seem to hint at a bigger picture, and let the reader draw his or her own conclusion as to what that bigger picture is.

    TC said this on April 18, 2008 at 7:03 pm

  6. to me this is where the real peace of life lies still.. waiting for acknowledgement..

    pieceofpie said this on April 19, 2008 at 7:32 pm

  7. Where life is really playing – a wonderfully open phrase that lends intself to myriad thoughts. Love it!

    tumblewords said this on April 20, 2008 at 5:00 am

  8. Very tranquil.

    lucricausa said this on April 21, 2008 at 12:36 am

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