Afire and Aflame
Their beginnings and ends were blurred.
Passion often erased their borders,
while equally hot distrust and fury
erected fences and laid landmines in a flash.
To envious observers there was something
illegally intense to this match of fire and flame.
– James Steerforth
Written with blurred, illegal and match from 3WW #88.
nicely done. i like. i hope to be a good writer as you are in the future. would you mind if i ask you to critique my work?