Towards the attractive secret

Would balance dictate me
to wander? No.

I’ve been wandering
unbalanced, I suppose.

I would like a rose
to stop this wandering –

and balance and repose.

– James Steerforth ( © 2008 )

Written using balance, dictate, wander from 3WW CXIV, also thinking of the film The Secret, which tells you that it’s all about the law of attraction.

~ by James Steerforth on December 3, 2008.

3 Responses to “Towards the attractive secret”

  1. How true! Nice work – it tells the spell!

  2. Well done. I especially like the first two stanzas, very strong. Have a nice day.

  3. That was very nice.

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