An exercise in positive negativity
The scene is a dreary café in some London suburb, where these former lovers have met. One in hopes of making up, the other …
“So you insist I’ve left no impact on you – ever?”
“Yes.”
“You’ve simply ejected me from memory?”
“Yes.”
“I’ve never rendered you happy or anything?”
“Yes, never. You’ve never rendered anything.”
“Thank you, my dear.”
“Good bye.”
James Steerforth (© 2011)
Written around eject, impact, render from 3WW.
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Big mistake asking all those questions. Like hitting your head against the wall. Well written piece.
Cool dialogue!
Goodbye! (Only joking!)
that was definitely passive
Reading that kinda hurts…
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powerful emotions, well conveyed.
love your blog,
come join our poetry picnic week 9 today,
first time participants can share 1 to 3 random poems.
Old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome.
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