Sometimes I
touch beyond
the visible
stage, where
life is really playing,
where the
with the world
is an effortless

– James Steerforth

This one is for 3WW and today’s three words: touching, visible, stage.


About James Steerforth

I am an author of poetry and fiction, translator and painter who loves to have fun with borrowed feathers.
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8 Responses to Touching

  1. anthonynorth says:

    Nicely done. I had an idea this prompt would go metaphysical, as mine has.

  2. Effortless flow….I like the phrasing of it.

    Mine is concrete? Do tell me what you think!

  3. suburbanlife says:

    Yes, YES, YES, James – when that happens, in spite of the busy, scrambling self, it is wonderful. Spare and elooquent, this ! G

  4. whypaisley says:

    and it is for those moments alone,, i live… masterfully done.

  5. TC says:

    Thanks for opening it up to comments! 🙂

    I like how you seem to hint at a bigger picture, and let the reader draw his or her own conclusion as to what that bigger picture is.

  6. pieceofpie says:

    to me this is where the real peace of life lies still.. waiting for acknowledgement..

  7. tumblewords says:

    Where life is really playing – a wonderfully open phrase that lends intself to myriad thoughts. Love it!

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