Touching

Sometimes I
touch beyond
the visible
stage, where
life is really playing,
where the
connection
with the world
is an effortless
flow.

– James Steerforth

This one is for 3WW and today’s three words: touching, visible, stage.

About James Steerforth

I am an author of poetry and fiction, translator and painter who loves to have fun with borrowed feathers.

anthonynorth says:

April 16, 2008 at 1:59 pm

Nicely done. I had an idea this prompt would go metaphysical, as mine has.
gautami tripathy says:

April 16, 2008 at 4:01 pm

Effortless flow….I like the phrasing of it.

Mine is concrete? Do tell me what you think!

http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/04/green-eyed-monster.html
suburbanlife says:

April 16, 2008 at 4:04 pm

Yes, YES, YES, James – when that happens, in spite of the busy, scrambling self, it is wonderful. Spare and elooquent, this ! G
whypaisley says:

April 17, 2008 at 12:15 am

and it is for those moments alone,, i live… masterfully done.
TC says:

April 18, 2008 at 7:03 pm

Thanks for opening it up to comments! 🙂

I like how you seem to hint at a bigger picture, and let the reader draw his or her own conclusion as to what that bigger picture is.
pieceofpie says:

April 19, 2008 at 7:32 pm

to me this is where the real peace of life lies still.. waiting for acknowledgement..
tumblewords says:

April 20, 2008 at 5:00 am

Where life is really playing – a wonderfully open phrase that lends intself to myriad thoughts. Love it!
lucricausa says:

April 21, 2008 at 12:36 am

Very tranquil.