It is a sort of sport –
a mind game,
useless but also
giving strange
satisfaction –
I have you beg
and plead –
on bended knees –
for the love
you never wanted.

– James Steerforth ( © 2009 )

Aubades are poems begging and tempting and pleading with a lover not to leave. Since that hardly ever works anyway and has been written about far too often throughout the history of poetry, I’m offering another exercise … of similar futility.

Suitable for Totally Optional Prompts’ Aubade as well as Sunday Scribblings’ Sports.


About James Steerforth

I am an author of poetry and fiction, translator and painter who loves to have fun with borrowed feathers.
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8 Responses to Aubade

  1. Linda Jacobs says:

    Oooh, I like this! I hate what he does but the poem is great!

  2. I like the clever weaving of thoughts here –

  3. I like the way you compare it with sports.

    It is.


  4. suburbanlife says:

    The ‘turn’ in this poem s brilliant. The whole has a very cold tone. G

  5. Tumblewords says:

    Sport, it is. I never learned the rules. Good post…

  6. stan says:

    Often the case – make it sound better than possible, and see the reaction. Of course, it always ends in tears.

  7. camtodd1846 says:

    Well done.

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