She tells him

Don’t give me that
hypnotic sulk, you drip.

That used to work, but
it ain’t workin’ no more.

Go feel sorry for yourself,
I ain’t doin’ it no more.

– James Steerforth ( © 2009 )

Written around drip, hypnotic and sulk from 3WW.

About James Steerforth

I am an author of poetry and fiction, translator and painter who loves to have fun with borrowed feathers.
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4 Responses to She tells him

  1. thommyg says:

    a strength in voice in this one.

  2. andy sewina. says:

    Dead good! I ain’t gonna work on Maggies farm no more!

  3. Go Inspire says:

    Gripping! Thanks for sharing your talents and for stopping by and commenting on my blog!
    Go Inspire

  4. Tumblewords says:

    Sadly funny and funnier, still. I love the power in this!

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