Suggestive no. 1

Now why would she call me obscene?
I was her loyal love after all,
even after the accident

– James Steerforth ( © 2009 )

A what I would call ‘suggestive haiku’ (or something like it, too not bothered to count syllables) written around Accident, Loyal and Obscene from 3WW.

About James Steerforth

I am an author of poetry and fiction, translator and painter who loves to have fun with borrowed feathers.
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2 Responses to Suggestive no. 1

  1. ThomG says:

    And interesting take on the prompt, and haiku as well. I think it’s fine to play with the count.

  2. i like the way it stands so open and so loud..

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