For A.
It’s Sunday morning
and speechless
apart from the dog
I already took on a
walk and reprimanded
to speed up a few times
While I felt free
to stop here and there
to pick the ripest berries
To get account
balances I drove
to the nearest town
along the river
that has the right
machine
Along factories
and quais with cranes,
scrap and coal
Turning into main
streets with grey
apartment buildings,
windows open
in hopes of ventilation,
grimy curtains immobile
Thinking of you
who have taken off
to places unknown
for a weekend
from the jumble
of your tiny place
in the orange house
on the hill – it’s
an elegy all right
– James Steerforth ( © 2008 )
Written for myself – and A. – after seeing advertisements for the movie Elegy based on a novel by Philip Roth. Looking at Totally Optional Prompts, I found that it fits there quite well; after all, elegies are about something lost.
This is wonderful -conveys the ordinary everyday-ness of loss, and is the more moving for this. G
Ah…the quiet pain of a Sunday morning alone. Running errands or taking a walk can sometimes be so depressing when soaked in loss. Very nicely done.
–DHS